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托福写作强调逻辑和论证,以整体来评分。但有些同学在平常学习中单单注意逻辑和论证,往往忽视了托福写作语法方面的雕琢,考场上在语言方面疏漏多多,那样即便你的思路和论证属于一流,最多也只能得个二流分数。小编为您整理七个托福写作语法问题,希望大家能规避这些错误。
托福写作语法问题1. 用词不当
原:the absence of groupwork is a disaster for teenagers in modern society.
改:the absence of teamwork is a disaster for teenagers in modern society.
评:groupwork是“分组”或者“小组集体任务”的意思。这位同学原本想说teamwork“团队合作”,却用了一个看起来很像,但实际完全不同的词,表达出来的意思就风马牛不相及了。
原:you will be dangerous if you keep moving without a clear view of the whole picture.
改:you will be in danger if you keep moving without a clear view of the whole picture.
评:dangerous表示所修饰的对象是“带来危险的,有危险性的”,而be in danger才是“身处险境”的意思。到底谁才是威胁呢?
原:firstly, the job, providing the opportunity for students to utilize what they learned in class, might effect their further development.
改:firstly, the job, providing the opportunity for students to utilize what they learned in class, might affect their further development.
评:模样长得像,意思可不同了。这里想用动词affect表示“影响”,却误写为名词effect“效果”,一字千里啊!
托福写作语法问题2. 搭配错误
原:nowadays, people are crazy pursuing to be excellent.
改:nowadays, people are crazy about excellence.
评:这位同学显然记错了be crazy about sth. 这个用法,写出来的句子自然会出问题啦。
原:besides, public speech can effectively increase your communication skills, which facilitate your salesman career.
改:besides, public speech can effectively improve your communication skills, which facilitate your salesman career.
评:此处是一个明显的动宾搭配错误。“提高……技巧”应该是improve the skills,而不是increase the skills.
托福写作语法问题3.词性错位
原:i will forget my sad and pressure from the work and the study.
改:i will forget my sadness and pressure from work and study.
评:sad是形容词,而这里明显需要一个名词,应该是sadness。
原:although making money is a priority for most people, spending time with the family is equal significant.
改: …, spending time with the family is equally significant.
评:形容词significant前需要用副词来修饰,所以equal应该改成equally。
托福写作语法问题4. 时态混乱
原:although i have no work experience when i was a teenager, i always dreamed about having a job.
改:although i had no work experience when i was a teenager, i always dreamed about having a job.
评:过去时的句子中冒出了现在时,同学你太粗心了,要仔细检查哦~
原:i would explain my view in the following paragraphs.
改:i’d like to explain… / i will explain…
评:可能是两种说法记混了吧,结果把时态搞错了……
托福写作语法问题5. 主谓不一致
原:the way we deal with the environmental problems are crucial to the prosperity of human-being.
改:the way we deal with the environmental problems is crucial to the prosperity of human-being.
评:谓语之前有两个名词时,主谓搭配的问题就常常出现了。这里真正的主语应该是单数名词the way,所以与之搭配的谓语也应该是单数的is。
托福写作语法问题6. 重复累赘
原:from my point of view, i think this argument is quite limited since many other ways can also help learning a foreign country.
改:from my point of view, this argument is quite limited since many other ways can also help us learn a foreign country.
评:from my point of view和i think重复啦,保留一个就好。当然这里建议留下更“高级”的from my point of view.
原:there are the majority of people who deem that they like to spend money on things which can bring them long memory.
改:majority of the people like to spend money on things that can be memorized for long.
评:中文句式说的“有很多人……”,但别一看到“有”就非要用there be句型不可哦,直接摆出主谓宾就行了。
“things that can be memorized for long”,被动语态明显更地道~
托福写作语法问题7. 中式英语
原:thus, one is easier to draw bosses’ attention and gain appreciation.
改:thus, it’s easier for you to draw bosses’ attention and gain appreciation.
评:中文习惯说“人们可以更容易地吸引老板的注意力”,而英语则习惯说“it’s easier for sb. to…”同学们要注意中英表述习惯的区别哦!
托福写作语法错误是考生很难避免的一大难题,大家只能通过不断的练习和修改、分析来逐步提高,可以多看一些托福写作范文,积累相关句型和模板,以减少失误。
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